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Where have you gone?You were there... I swear you were  I'd open my eyes and you were there  You'd hold my hand when I was scared  You'd reassure me when I needed it   
I closed my eyes... Just for a second  Suddenly I'm alone... Staring at my reflection  Cold wind brushes over my neck  In darkness I watch myself mouth the words   
Where are you? Where have you gone?
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We've all felt like this?They say the best words flow out alongside tears,  They say the mind should listen to the heart’s fears,  They say I’m okay and fine just the way I am  Then they say that I’m not being all that I am   
Their words confuse…  Their words confound…  Their words hurt and ache  They hurt and ache deep down   
They say that more is said through action than speech,  They say that my thoughts are only mine to reach,  They say that all that I do and say is for me to choose,  Then they say that I shouldn’t say that… it’s abuse   
Their wor We've all felt like this?
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OctoberPen in hand and paper on table  He writes until he’s no longer able  The palm of his hand swells in red  All his knowledge flows through his head   
In the field he stands up tall  Whilst the others droop and fall  Petals fall in the form of words  Written thoughts but never heard   
His head aches, his eyes strain  His hand sweats, his arms pain  This elegant flower sags down  Just like all the others around   
It nears an end, the doors edge open  He throws his pen in exasperation  “Stop writing” they command to him  Feeling returns to e October
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Life TakenThe deciduous tree’s final branch snapped and heavily fell to the ground. Unrest stirred around the fallen arm as ants hurried away and grass, crushed and trapped under the tree’s dead limb, turned brown.   
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The sharp steel of the savage shovel shifted soil to a new home. Dirt slammed down upon the glistening grass after being tossed carelessly in the wind, to find its own way amongst the air. Warm yet dirty hands warmed the seed as it was pushed further down into the ground. Swiftly, that warmth disappea Life Taken
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It's done

Sun Nov 16, 2008, 2:53 PM
Higher School Certificate is done... Now I just have to sit and wait for my results. My assessment rank is officially out and I'm pleased with that, surprising myself even in some cases.

It's a week or so before I go away, and I'm unsure as to how that is going to pan out as I've never really gone away before, especially without parental supervision.

So yet again, I'm not really going to be actively participating in the dA community, my sincerest apologies. However, not many people seem really interested in my works anyway, so it's no real loss? lol

In my absence, spread the word of my awesomeness people? Meanwhile, I have posted a recent... sentimental-ish piece, please check it out... please?

Until later, xx

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  • Mood: Apprehensive
  • Listening to: Χαος &#915
  • Reading: Stone of Farewell by Tad Williams
  • Watching: Windows Media Player's Visualisation xD
  • Playing: LoZ: Twilight Princess
  • Eating: All Bran w/ Honey and Almond
  • Drinking: Lipton Tea

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  • Current Residence: Weston, NSW Australia
  • Interests: Gaming, writing, Mathematics
  • Favourite movie: Labyrinth or Die Hard 2: Die Harder
  • Favourite band or musician: Static-X, Disturbed, Metallica, DragonForce & The Veronicas
  • Favourite genre of music: Metal
  • Favourite artist: Vincent Van Gogh
  • Favourite poet or writer: Lewis Carroll
  • Favourite style of art: Surrealism
  • Operating System: Windows
  • MP3 player of choice: Nokia 5310 Xpress Music (phone/mp4 player)
  • Favourite game: Final Fantasy VIII, just brillian
  • Favourite gaming platform: Nintendo DS Lite
  • Favourite cartoon character: SpongeBob

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:iconwickedlyloquacious:
~WickedlyLoquacious Jun 4, 2009, 6:51:40 PM
Hey there! We appreciate your continued support and hope that you'll drop by soon to take part in some really cool activities and poetry shares!

:heart: - ~WickedlyLoquacious

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Please check out *DistinctLiterature instead!
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*Agent-Elrond Apr 13, 2008, 11:49:46 AM
Thank you for the watch — I'm glad you liked my stuff so much. :love:

I really like your poems (I know I've only commented on one, but I'm short on time) so I'm gonna watch you right back! =P

Now, I have to ask. You write poetry, you listen to 2 Sense… and your name is Raymond.

Did you write the Shrodinger's Cat riddle? :o

Sorry, I gotta know. ^^;

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92% of the population of Earth are boring, uncreative, unoriginal bums. If you are one of the 8% who aren't... do not copy and paste this into your signature!

~agentELROND
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~a-proper-name Apr 13, 2008, 3:19:08 PM
lmao

i'm so honoured that you thought i might have done such a thing

but no

i'm sorry, the search for the elusive raymond riddler is still continuing

i'm pleased you like my poetry, if you get time i'd love for you to comment them all

even if it involves creative criticism

i love 2sense

my friend (who i mentioned in a reply to your comment on Ignored Cry) is to thank for introducing him to me

i've only been listening since the start of season 4

but i'm a devoted fan

and love his rants

and yes, i love your works

they are brilliant

i'm going to take time (now that it's school holidays and all) to browse through your gallery and leave some more comments

feel free to add me on msn or myspace or anything if you'd like

i always like to make it look as though i have more friends lol

=D

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"But I, being poor, have only my dreams; I have spread my dreams under your feet; Tread softly because you tread on my dreams." - W. B. Yeats
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*Agent-Elrond Apr 13, 2008, 5:43:12 PM
Yay, thank you!

Wow, I never thought there would be two Raymonds who listened to 2 Sense and wrote poetry. :o

Hee hee, I don't have MSN or MySpace, but I've added you to my friend's list here so more people will see your pwning avvie. =D

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92% of the population of Earth are boring, uncreative, unoriginal bums. If you are one of the 8% who aren't... do not copy and paste this into your signature!

~agentELROND
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~a-proper-name Apr 13, 2008, 11:31:27 PM
who'd have thunk it ay?

apparently thunk is a word, well firefox's spellcheck is letting it go through

so who knows

it's weird lol

thankyou for adding me as a friend

now it looks like i have more friends

and hopefully some fans of yours shall be converted and become fans of mine as well

let's form a new religion?

i reckon we could get away with it, we could have 2 and jibba as our deities?

your call lol

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"But I, being poor, have only my dreams; I have spread my dreams under your feet; Tread softly because you tread on my dreams." - W. B. Yeats
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*Agent-Elrond Apr 14, 2008, 7:09:24 AM
You're welcome!

Oh, but have you not heard? I am already devoted to the Flying Spaghetti Monster! :worship:

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92% of the population of Earth are boring, uncreative, unoriginal bums. If you are one of the 8% who aren't... do not copy and paste this into your signature!

~agentELROND
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Mood: Love ~jessabelle-xxx Apr 11, 2008, 10:16:30 PM
wow,
ur awesome :)
thanks ray :)
maybe u should help me with mine :)
heheheeh
loveyou
xx
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Mood: Adoration ~a-proper-name Apr 11, 2008, 11:45:38 PM
Nawww, thank you

I'll happily help you with yours if that's what you'd like

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"But I, being poor, have only my dreams; I have spread my dreams under your feet; Tread softly because you tread on my dreams." - W. B. Yeats
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